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Fedi.Camp is what people make of it. This year, we had fewer workshops and presentations, allowing more time for relaxation and holiday activities. Of course, there were still talks and discussions about several software projects connected by ActivityPub, soldering and building blinky devices, pen-and-paper sessions, cross-golf, and video presentations.
- In the evenings, the warming bonfire was a highlight, where music broke the boundaries of language, being the one commonly shared among all people, artists and amateurs played their instruments and sang together while kids roasted marshmallows and enjoyed the building fluorescent rings and other objects. This again created a soothing and communal atmosphere.
+ In the evenings, the warming bonfire was a highlight, where music was playend and songs where heard, being commonly shared among all participants and guests, while kids roasted marshmallows and enjoyed the building of fluroscent glowing rings, glasses and other objects. This again created a soothing and communal atmosphere.
- We were once again reminded of the environmental impact of nuclear power during our tour of the nearby atomic storage facility. This sobering experience highlighted the catastrophic nature of running nuclear power plants and producing waste that requires human maintenance for 10,000 years and beyond.
+ We were once more reminded of the environmental impact of nuclear power usage during our tour to the nearby atomic storage facility. This sobering experience underscored the catastrophic risks of operating nuclear power plants and producing waste that requires maintenance for 10,000 years and beyond.
Strolling through the forest, engaging in tech talks, and relaxing in the sun made this year's Fedi.Camp truly charming. The unique combination of activities and wonderful participants created an unforgettable experience.